Grammar | SPOCA | S, P, Od, Oi, Cs, Co, and A or (A).
GRAMMAR / SPOCA
Sentence Patterns
Label and bar them in terms of S, P, Od, Oi, Cs, Co, and A or (A).
The underlined items (which subordinate clauses) act as single element; for example, ‘when it rains’ should be labelled ( A ).
N.B. Bar and label only simple sentences (sentences with one single verb)
1. (He | often | goes | fishing) |
S | A | V | A |
and | catches | nothing)
conj | V | O
_She |recently| bought | jewelry
S | A | V | O |
| and |sold | it. It's WRONG
conj | V | O
2. YOUR SENTENCE: DROP ‘recently’ OR USE THE PRESENT PERFECT FORM OF THE VERB FOR THE PAST TENSE EXPRESSES A TIME THAT HAS NO RELATION WITH THE PRESENT; BY CONTRAST, THE PRESENT PERFECT ALWAYS EXPRESSES THIS RELATION. FOR EXPMLE, THIS PAST-PRESENT RELATION CAN CLEARLY BE SEEN IF WE CONSIDER THE ADVERBS WE USE WITH THE PERFECT TENSE/ JUST (= RECENTLY), ALREADY, SO FAR, NEVER…. THESE ARE USED NOW THEY POINT TO A POINT IN TIME BEFORE NOW (= THE PAST)
2. ( My cousins | work | in
London
S | V | A
; ( they | sell | cars )
S | V | O
_ ( My aunt | lives | in Germany,
S | V | A
she | teaches | English )
S | V | O
3. THE 1st SENTENCE IS A COMPOUND SENTENCE (ONE SENTENCE THAT CONSISTS OF TWO INDEPENDENT CLAUSES) BUT THE SENTENCE DOES NOT HAVE A COORDINATOR BY A SEMI-COLON (;) WHICH SHOULD BE POSITIONED BETWEEN THE TWO BRACKETS THUS: … London ) ; ( they… AND THE GENERAL SVOCA PATTERN SHOULD READ: SVA; SVO;
- SO, A SEMI-COLON IS A COORDINATOR.
3. (She | sits | at the window) and
S | V | A | conj
(watches | the traffic.)
V | O
_ He | works | at the bank | and |
S | V | O | conj |
reads | books
CORRECT ANALYSIS (OF COURSE LACKING THE REQUIRED BARRING); YOUR SENTENCE SOUNDS STRANGE BECAUSE WHEN WORKING IN A BANK, YOU ANALYSE SPREADSHEETS AND DO STATS – ‘BANK’ AND ‘READS’ MAKE IT ILLOGICAL, BETTER: "… books at home".
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